Lonely Winds..
The wind it howls though my mind
As it rushes through the window pane
Gaps of thought entwined with yours
Of lonely hearts drumming on the door
To let me in, and know..
That all is safe despite the din
As yet another night begins the lonely thoughts
But as the wind it gathers strength and beats
Relentless howling to come in.
You are there within my mind,
I see the shadow as you shine
Your thoughts entwine within my mind
No longer now alone am I,
For like the wind you echo wild
Reverberating around the room,
Clearing the mists no longer gloom
As together we shall be..
Joined in breath in winds of past
Forging ahead in mighty blast
We shed the yoke of burdens carried
Too long we’ve wasted and tarried
Within the room of lonely thought
Where winds did howl and screech and tare
For now my love there’s no compare
As winds of thoughts you reach my mind
And loneliness I no longer find
As you entwine your thoughts with mine..
© Sue Dreamwalker 2010 All rights reserved.
Dreamwalker's Sanctuary 
Nov 23, 2010 @ 22:28:10
Bravo, Dreamwalker………..such a lovely, well written poem, with such a delightful ending dear. Thanks for sharing<3 xxx
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Nov 23, 2010 @ 22:31:34
Thank you Stevy… nice that you are following… And wishing you a Happy Thanksgiving at this time of year.. and hope all your family and Loved ones are well also….. 🙂
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Nov 24, 2010 @ 01:02:18
A beautiful writing Sue that tells a story all the way through to an equally beautiful finale , a masterpiece of words
Ian aka Emu
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Nov 24, 2010 @ 11:18:24
Thank you Ian.. I’m flattered.. and you are no stranger to masterpieces of your own making.. Many thanks.
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Nov 25, 2010 @ 10:51:29
Lovely Dreamwalker a story from the start and the ending that makes me sigh.
Hugs Sheilax
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Nov 25, 2010 @ 11:20:51
Thank you Sheila…. I hope my poems make one think, Sigh, laugh, and Cry… and if they stirred but one emotion then they did their work.. Love to you 🙂
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Nov 25, 2010 @ 10:59:03
“We’re born alone, we die alone. Only through our love and friendship can we create the illusion for the moment that we’re not alone.” – Orson Welles
….you´ve painted this illusion from a different angle, and with a new ingredience….the power of thoughts. An amazing piece of work Dreamwalker!
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Nov 25, 2010 @ 11:19:25
Thank you Eclipse … No more amazing my friend than your own exceptional poetry.. Which weaves its own magic into the realms of thought.. 🙂
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Nov 25, 2010 @ 11:54:07
beautiful written dreamwalker…how are you? ? i am feeling fantastic 😛 i’m back in the home and it’s great to be home lol …hope to hear from you soon much love,shiva xxx
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Nov 25, 2010 @ 12:03:55
Home is where the Heart is Shiva, and I am pleased you are feeling Great… May you continue to do so… Love to you.. xx
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